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Post by Shockvalue on Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:46 pm

A lifetime in a boring corner
And, all I have to do is see
But I refuse to believe
That life is what we have to live


Itís what we have to give
And I, I canít begin to stress
The feelings that I hold right now
The feelings that I canít repress

And Iím here to give you
And Iím here to say
That dealing is the only way
ĎCause life, it keeps going on
When itís going all wrong
And you canít delay

Overtaken by the shadows of night
Overtaken by constant surprises
And yet, it all seems so fake
And I canít begin to state
That living is the only way

A lifetime in a boring corner
All you have to do is see
But you refuse to believe


I need an opinion on this. Post them here.
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Re: Need an Opinion

Post by Malaikvavit on Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:54 pm

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Post by Blue11 on Tue Nov 11, 2008 9:01 pm

I think it was nice.
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Re: Need an Opinion

Post by dominic345 on Tue Nov 11, 2008 9:37 pm

nice poem you got there landon
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Post by Jpg on Tue Nov 18, 2008 5:47 pm

was that yours?it was pretty good
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Re: Need an Opinion

Post by Latios on Fri Nov 21, 2008 12:36 am

Malaikvavit wrote:
I lol'd.

Not bad, a nice poem overall.

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Post by pokeboy on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:24 pm

It was OK i guess. im not sure.
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